Broken heart </3 (edit)

A girl named Jasmine came upon my life, she was strong, beautiful, and attractive. We spent hours and hours talking to each other, but it soon came to an end. As days gone by, I became a bewildered feeble man who loved her. However, she did not like me back. When I sleep, my dreams started to turn into a figure of her in lovely red dress. As I approached her, a man suddenly came out of the blue and escorted her for a dance. I became enraged in anger. Then, I fell to floor and started pounding the ground like wild beast. My eyes became diluted in tears which ran down my mournful face. "JASMINE WHY!! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DO THIS TO ME!!!"...I shouted. MY DREAMS became into A NIGHTMARE. I stood up and ran towards them in rage. I clinched my fist and threw it into his fragile face. The blow of my fist viciously hit his upper jaw crushing most of his teeth and spurred him into an unconscious state. Then, I looked at Jasmine, she was completely shocked by the horrifying event that just occured. Her face was pale white as if she were in mental distress. Soon, she hurried to call "911." A while later, the police and ambulance arrived. I saw the police come up to her and started asking her questions. After the talk was over, she dropped onto her knees and cried. I soon noticed that he was dead... I can't believe that I killed a man. Hours later, the police cuffed me and sent me to prison...When I woke up, I could only think about JASMINE JASMINE JASMINE....

Jasmine...If I was the one you liked, then my dreams would be dreams and live forever.

Woah killer :3
Nice, you can be a writer.. maybe an idea

He couldn't be a writer. This is absolute garbage.
Strong, beautiful, and loved? Loved by whom?
Jasmine doesn't, and isn't going to 'like' you as you wish for.
You lusty scoundrel.

That man would tear you apart if you were to try this.

The IDIOT WRITIING THIS STORY >..>